Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 6 September 2018
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Shushant,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the mix of images and writing that you included in this blog post, and the fact that you added a really thorough introduction - well done. I hadn't realised that because there are so many parts of the heart, there are so many different things that can go wrong with it!
Something to think about for next time is making sure your blog has an interesting title, that makes people want to read further.
Tino pai - very good work.
Miss Patrick